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Mother told me never to play outside during daylight, that the sun would hurt me.

Then why do the people in our folk tales fall sleep in golden meadows?

She smiled and told me to sleep.

That was before the accident.

I saw the ashes and wished I had listened.
©2009 *ravenofroses
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written for [link] and their theme "sun." willl be revised later, most likely. enjoy.

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This is lovely. The second and last lines are particularly striking in contrast...golden meadows and ashes.

Nice work. :)

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~LML

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“How can I know what I think until I read what I wrote.” ~Flannery O'Connor

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*bows* thankee kindly, my dear. i am quite glad you liked this piece.

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Now be a good little girl and drink your medicine...

Ave Atque Vale

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